That looks very neat but can I suggest you replace the crimped fuel line clips with some screw type
I generally agree. But not all crimps clips are created equal. I've been using these Oetiker full wrap type crimp clips on everything from old Triumph bikes to modern BMWs for 30 years with no issue. Correct sizing of the clips is important also.
No doubt part of the issue with OEM setup is the brass hose barbs with very little mechanical grip combined with the unnatural hose angle.
