Thank you all for your comments:
One about the cow meadow made me smile, that's my front garden!
I take on-board the details of the car and also some don't show it in a positive manner.
The paintwork is in exceptionally good condition but showing that isn't easy.
I agree the colour is marmite, however more people like it that don't, well they say that to may face.
Regarding wording, I tried a flowery version that was less of a list and that didn't work, this is the 3rd format.
I also approached dealers to sell on commission, non were in a position to take another car, they all said they were full of stock, hence trying privately with a reduced price.
Ian
