Not bad, but IMHO any EJ Thribb verse should include some allusion to Keith or to his mum.


So, farewell then
Morgan four seater.

You were a bit bigger
than the two seaters,

but still quite pretty.
(like Keith's mum).

Now you are no more.
(also like Keith's mum).

E.J.Thribb 17 1/2


Giles. Mogless in Paris.